"A song for the pretty blonde girl in the smoking section"...hm the intro is a bit too repetitive. Then you should start the singing at 30 seconds, not after replaying the guitar part. otherwise I like the guitar part from 2:40 to 3:23.
Written On Your Wall is pretty nice. I think you need the bass sound a bit up. . Otherwise the vocals was alright on that song. The drumps sometimes were a bit off sometimes but overall I liked it. i'll download the rest to see how it goes